DOG PROBLEM

Here is a recount that I wrote. I was learning to add detail

pretest science

Today we sat an online test to see what we already knew about animal classification. We are doing a study on this topic this term. I think I have heaps I can learn about classifying animals.

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My new maths strategy

Hi I hope you learn something new from me. I am pretty good at this strategy

smile! Explanation Writing time

This is my explanation I wrote. I learned that I can use words like firstly, secondly and finally to organise my ideas. I know to end sentences with a full stop and start with a capital letter.
I think I was successful because I used in summary at the end.

BY TUMU

In Room 6 we used a model to
show the water cycle. We used a
bowl for the Earth and we put
water in the. Bowl and we used a
cup for the land and we put a
rock
in to the cup and the rock help
it
stay in the water. And we put a
rock on top of the glad wrap
and
left it on the table in the sun for
two weeks. And so we  waited
for
two weeks.

Evaporation

We put the bowl into the sun
and
the sun transform in to steam
and
the steam went to the top of  the
glad wrap and it transform into
tiny droplets but how did ti get
there?. It's condensation

And lastly the tiny droplets fell
because they were too heavy.
And then they fell in to the
cup and
the cup got heavy. We pull the
glad wrap off and there was
water
in the cup.

fishing day

I am learning to use different sentence beginning and to make sure all
sentences begin with a capital letter and end with a full stop. (then, then, then, then, then)

I am using to much then then then.
I think  I am good at doing the some words

                              Going with my brothers and my sister

We went to my sister’s house and went fishing.  i went with my brother in

law fishing.  We caught 17 big Kahawai.  It was cool as, because we stayed

down in Paihia with my brother-in-law and my brothers for the week.

 We caught some little snappers. My brother in law caught the smallest

snapper, it was like a tiny rock. He caught a fish what had yellow fins.

I we went and got some fish and chips for lunch.Then we carried on fishing.

Then we moved to the wharf where we caught a giant snapper. We were

trying to pull it up for one hour and then we pulled it up. We went back to

Paihia and then we cooked two kahawai and ate them.And we gave the

giant snapper to my dad. And that was the  best day ever.

Supported by Whaea Ruth

Ki o rahi

Last term we Played ki o rahi I really liked it and we whent to a big game this is it