here is my narrative I wrote. It is about a princess and it has a sad ending. I hope you like it. One thing in my writing that I am learning is to add more detail and take risks with spelling.
Tumu, you worked well when writing this. I like how you persevered with adding detail. The parts with direct speech really made your narrative fun to read. Great story! I look forward to reading your next piece of work!
Tumu, you worked well when writing this. I like how you persevered with adding detail. The parts with direct speech really made your narrative fun to read. Great story! I look forward to reading your next piece of work!
ReplyDeletetumu i like that you used your picture
ReplyDeleteThat was cool. I liked reading that.
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